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A look at the Jaguars Top 10 picks the last six years
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BeastBrief, I'll put this as constructively as I can. Although I haven't used it in a decade, I have a degree in Journalism. I went through the story and flagged 20 parts as either grammatically wrong, needing to be worded differently or needing to be checked with an AP Stylebook.
The two most structurally important parts of the story, the headline and the lead, have major problems right from the start. If you want specific feedback, feel free to PM me. |
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