Quote:Hi fellow Jaguars fans, I wrote a piece on why I think our rookie TJ Yeldon is undervalued and should prove to be a breakout player this season. Please take a look and would love your feedback.

 

https://medium.com/@sleeperbot/why-tj-ye...31bd0e9d21

 

My honest feedback.

 

It's a nice "fluff piece" for the dead zone.  If it's geared more towards fantasy football players, then it's a very good write up.  If it's supposed to be "news", then it's kind of poor.

 

Don't get me wrong, I think it's a good piece, but it's mostly opinion rather than fact.  As an example you wrote.

 

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As the clear starter out of the backfield, Yeldon is projected to shoulder at least 55–65% of the workload this year, translating to 200–230 carries on the season.

 

That has not yet been determined.  Is it likely?  Yes, but it's not "clear" at this point.

 

You also point out the three rookie receivers from last year, but remember, there was Cecil Shorts involved in the offense.  There is also another dynamic added to the offense, that being the addition of a certain TE that isn't mentioned in your article.

 

With most players, past performance in college does not necessarily translate to performance in the NFL.

 

Again, don't get me wrong, I like your write up for the most part.  I'm giving you my honest critique.  My advice to you is to keep writing.

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