All-22 makes some good points that I didn't even think about.  While I don't agree with some of your analysis, I think it's written pretty well.  I think finding your own voice will help.  I like the idea All-22 has about getting more in depth or painting a picture.

 

For instance---  Your answer to the Myers question, while short, was probably the best.  You put personality into the answer and also showed you're a true fan that has been there in the seats.  On top of that, it was a cool story.  I'm not sure you can answer every single question in that manner.  But the more "in depth" you can be either by discussing a specific micro-point and translating that into a macro-point of view is always a good thing.  And then personal stories here and there are also good reading.

 

Anyways, if you keep posting, I'll keep reading  :-)

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